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Kicker
June 7th, 2006
an anthro comic that I soon hope to make.
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Phoenix June 15th, 2006
Perhaps your title page should be a little bit less cluttered. Just my opinion anyways. :)
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Kicker June 16th, 2006
not really
I think all pages should be packed with action, anyway its got to give a clue what it is about.
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sunshine_ley June 16th, 2006
I think maybe you should have less open space, I mean that surrounding them, is it a cave? I think you should do less cave and a bit more of the characters, since that's what the comic is about, I assume. Maybe a close up on their faces or even on the situation...maybe make it tense so the reader is inticed to look at more than the cover.
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Kicker June 20th, 2006
The point is, setting the scene. The main character is marooned when the ship (which doesn't seem to have registered on the scanner) crashes, he is surrounded by a swarm of insect like creatures which he kills with an entire clip of ammo, now he has half a clip and a dagger...
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