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June 7th, 2006 |
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an anthro comic that I soon hope to make. |
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| Phoenix |
June 15th, 2006 |
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| Perhaps your title page should be a little bit less cluttered. Just my opinion anyways. :) |
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June 16th, 2006 |
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| I think all pages should be packed with action, anyway its got to give a clue what it is about. |
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| sunshine_ley |
June 16th, 2006 |
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| I think maybe you should have less open space, I mean that surrounding them, is it a cave? I think you should do less cave and a bit more of the characters, since that's what the comic is about, I assume. Maybe a close up on their faces or even on the situation...maybe make it tense so the reader is inticed to look at more than the cover. |
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June 20th, 2006 |
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| The point is, setting the scene. The main character is marooned when the ship (which doesn't seem to have registered on the scanner) crashes, he is surrounded by a swarm of insect like creatures which he kills with an entire clip of ammo, now he has half a clip and a dagger... |
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